Timescar's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Escape by snowbuddy0]

MORE WORK, more instutmentatage!

It sounds like this was your first project. Spend more time on things, and they usually turn out sounding better. I know with my songs on here, i make at least 5 drafts before i even think about uploading them...

I use FL also, and one thing i will suggest is getting some additional VSTi insturments to go with it. Even with XXL, sytrus sucks. At least i think so. I would suggest looking into ReFX's insturments, especially Nexus. It is excellent for trance, and prettu much any style, although i also use a slew of other VSTis.

Message me if you want some more info.

[The End Is Near!]

Good melody, but could use some variety

I only have 2 major gripes with this song. One, i think you could use some different (or more) insturments. Two, i think more variety could be good. And perhaps a longer song. But otherwise, very good.

I love the melody...it all fits together very nicely. Nice work!

DAGamesOfficial responds:

lol I was kinda thinking of adding a bit more, but then I thouht I might as well, just keep the melody and other stuff, because it does sound a BIT like a loop (could be useful ya never know), anyway, glad ya liked it anyway.

[gospel trance gray]

Gospel Hip Hop gray

Like p4c said...it sounds more like Hip Hop than trance. Still very nice...even though its not my style.

The best aspect of this is the drums. I love the delay effects. The piano could have a little more power to it...maybe a flanger or chorus on it? The synth is very good, also.

gray1 responds:

thank you very much
yah it is hip hop but the i cut a sample up and did somthin it was the gospel trance
so i just ended up putin it in trance

[_-={Raw Energy}=-_]

Could be heavier, but still good.

I like this, it lets you get lost in the music. As such, i wouldnt call it raw energy...for that, i would use heavier insturments.

I love the percussion in the beginning, it gives it a very militaristic feeling. but then, it kind of fades out...not exactly raw energy. It gives you a picture of marching military, so maybe some name with power in it. It switches around a lot...which can be very good, but in this case i think could have been done a little better...with more of a buildup, you know?

If you want to make it more of an "Energy" song, add heavier insturments. More bass, etc. But overall, very nice, not something you come across every day.

MaestroRage responds:

Heavier instruments you say eh?

You're quite right with the buildups. This song was a very new concept to me, so in essence, there are holes in quite a few places. I was in the midst of making another DnB track before school decided to enslave my soul, but that one was sounding to be more... clear.

Will try to add more bass next time, thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it! I'm sorry for the late response!